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My name is John Mark B Oriente. I’m 15 years old. I live in Manueva, Santa, ilocos Sur Near the plaza. I’m a highschool student at Ilocos sur national highschool as a grade 10 student. Im not really an active person but I am a person who is worried about my health. I don’t really socialize that much because I have other priorities to do.
Every day I wake up from bed without fatigue and stress, I do about 30 min or less of exercise like stretching, jumping jacks and jogging. I start the day by cooking breakfast for my family. When that’s done I look for things that are misplaced or dirty and clean them up or fix them. Once that’s done I do my daily chores then take a break again so that I ca preapare to cook again for lunch. After eating lunch I rest myself a bit and then I play my games until 4pm. After that I do my chores again. When im done with my chores I take a bath and eat my dinner. I go in bed by 8pm, and make sure I get 8 hours of sleep no matter what.
I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to have a peaceful life in which there are no problems. I can only see myself as quiet, sarcastic, and caring person. I can only say that I’m a person who loves his family and my only priority is only helping my family.
What I like on this article is about how straight forward it is. It simple shows to the reader who and what this person's identity. I'm very inspired on the conclusion where he said "I'm a person who wishes to have peaceful life which there are no problems". I also wishes that kind of life where there is no war and tragedies. By just reading Johnmark's first blog I can assure that he is a truly great person. I am glad to meet and to have a friend like him.
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